Write Away 11/12/09

                                                        The Magic Remote

        One Saturday morning I went downstairs. I opened up my new box of Lucky Charms, and I saw the most amazing prize! It was a tiny remote that could take me back in time! I went upstairs to get dressed. I wanted to try it out. So I went outside, and I pressed the nombers 2001. I was all of a sudden in my old living room! I saw myself when I was two. My mom was watching the news. The baby me was sitting on the couch. The grownup me tapped on my mom, but she couldn't see me. 

     After that  I looked on the news. I saw the Twin Towers falling down. It was incredible! Then I took out my remote, and I pressed 2009. I was back in my front yard. It was at that moment I realized  this remote could teach me about the past. That remote changed my life forever because it taught me about the Twin Towers. You never know what you can find in a cereal box!

                                                                                                                                   Sarah

      I was eating cereal on a Saturday morning when an amazing prize fell out of the box. I have seen that toy before. It is the prize I want to go with my collection. It was the thing I wanted but my mom will be mad. It was a Barbie doll, and if my mom sees it I will get in big trouble. It will be a mess. It is a beautiful box.

                                                                                                                                   Abbie


      I was eating cereal Saturday morning. I poured cereal in my bowl. I was pouring milk, and I found an amazing toy in my bowl.When I found the toy in my bowl I got it out, and started to eat my cereal. When I was done with my cereal I looked at my toy. It was pink and purple. It was an MP3 player. I showed my parents. They liked it. I went to my room and started to listen to music on my bed. I started falling to sleep. When I woke up it wasn't there. I looked everywhere, and I still did not find it. I went into my sister's room, and I found it under her bed. 

                                                                                                                                       Jessica F.

     One day I was eating breakfast. When I took my first bite it felt like a whole new world. I said, This is not cool, man. Not cool, said my brothers. I said, I want to know what makes my teeth feel like this. So  my brothers said, This is not so bad. I said, Not so bad! I will tell you what is not so bad. That Landon called 865, 674, 797. I don't know what 865, 674, 797 is. Do you want to know what it is? It is the dentist! That is where you go if you get an infection in your tooth!

                                                                                                                                 Jacob

        I woke up one Saturday and got the cereal, and there was a map that fell out. It was very old. When I got it out of the box it had so much dust on it that I could not see it. I cleaned it off and showed my mom and dad. That was the end. The map took me to an amazing house that had glass around it.

                                                                                                                                Hannah

                                                       My Amazing Prize

     One morning I got my new cereal box. I got a tree flashlight. The tree light was green, and it had a green and blue button.. What I did with it was I got on my brothere's nerves. It was funny. Then I had to go to my room. 

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      I was eating my cereal on Saturday morning when an amazing prize fell out of the box. It was just a piece of shiny metal. It said you are about to experience a whole new world. I didn't know what that meant. Then the house started to shake. The light came through the window. Then I was floating on a cloud. I was scared. There was a metal piece like a board. It said you had to go through the obstacle. When you do you will find all the answers to everything. I started. I had to jump from cloud to cloud. When I was done I came to a golden gate. I climbed through it . There was a rope. I had to go across it. Then I saw God. He said, "Ask Me anything." I asked Him what this is all about. He said for a chance to do things right. I said OK. He sent me back home. I grew older and had a kid. I got her favorite cereal. She looked in it. She saw a prize in it. It was a piece of metal.

                                                                                                                                          Megan

    I woke up on a Saturday, and I went upstairs. I opened my cereal box. There was a toy in it. It was a little Teddy bear. I loved playing with my new toy. It was the only fun toy I ever had. It was amazing to me. I took it everywhere. I took it to the mall. I took it to school. I took it on recess. I'm so glad I found it in my cereal box. His name is Teddy Gram.

                                                                                                                                         Amyiah

   I was eating breakfast and got my cereal and got a prize. I found a bouncy ball and played with it. It was colored like the flag of America. Then I showed my mom, and she said good. Then I took it outside. Then my dog got it and tore it up.

                                                                                                                                               Jordan

                                                    Write Away 12/09/09

            I woke up one day, and I did not know that it was Christmas. I ran, and my sister was screaming. She was proud of Christmas. My daddy was not home for Christmas. Me and my brother and sister were sad. I was afraid Christmas was ruined. I went to sleep and had weird dreams. We only had one present for each and it was a Gameboy. Then someone was knocking on our door. It was our daddy, and we were happy. We had a lot of fun. Christmas was saved, and we had a lot of presents.

                                                                                                                                    Jeronimo

    I woke up this morning, and something was under my Christmas tree. I didn't know what it was so I waited until everyone was awake to open my secret present. When I opened it, it was a reindeer bell. It had a note taped to it. It said you can make as many wishes as you want, and it will come true. So my first wish was to go Santa's workshop. It took me to the North Pole, but nothing was there. I saw the actual North Pole. It said to put in a code. The code was on the bell. It was 423748. Santa's workshop was there. 

     I saw the elves working really hard for next Christmas already. I asked an elf, "Do you not stop work ever?" "Oh, goodness, no we never stop working here in the North Pole." "Do you ever sleep?"  "No." "Where is Santa?" "In his house-third door on the left." I  knocked on his door and he said, "Come on in. I am just doing my exercise for the day." I said, "It is not an elf. It is the girl you gave the reindeer bell to." "Oh. Angel Hope." "Yeah. That's me alright. I came to visit you today." "That's jolly of you. I will give you a tour of the whole workshop," so we went to the bakery, the toy factory, last, but not least, Santa's house. We went through his fireplace. 

     The tour was over, and I went home. I will never forget the day at the North Pole. An angel took me back home to my family. It was so much fun. Also, I left out a part. I got to see the reindeer.

                                                                                                                                       Savanna

   One Christmas I woke up and went to the Christmas tree to open presents. When I got there my brother was hanging decorations. The tree fell down. I was sad. They put it up again. My mom gave me my present. My dad gave my brother his present. Mom got hers. Dad got his. Brother got a phone. I got a horse. Dad got a jacket. Mom got a pan. It was such a fun Christmas. I loved it. I hope you did too.

                                                                                                                                              Danielle 

    One morning  and guess what was under my Christmas tree? There was a lot of monster trucks. Fifty of them and fifty go carts too. It was the best Christmas we ever had and a big Christmas tree.

                                                                                                                                             Jonathan

      I woke up one morning. I put the Christmas tree up and put decorations on it and presents under it. Then my mom wrapped more presents while I was asleep. Then we opened some of our Christmas presents on Christmas night. We got a new Nintendo DS game. Then we got a Wii. It was so cool.

                                                                                                                                               Jesse S.

    I woke up Christmas morning, and presents were under the Christmas tree.I woke up early and looked out the window, and I saw Santa. I saw one present that was really big. It said to Madison, from Santa. I was excited. Then I got out of my bed and went to the Christmas tree. It was decorated with colorful lights, ribbons, candy canes, and lots of presents under it. Then I looked on the table. All of the cookies were gone. Then I woke up my brother. I said, "Brother, brother, Santa is real!" He said, "No, he is not." I said, "Come and see." We went back to bed. My present was a make-up set. We had a great Christmas. It was fun It was great. It was cool. I love Christmas.

                                                                                                                                        Madison